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The Orphan

by Dharthisha Naid on May 05, 2010

The Orphan

If only I could feel her touch, if only I could hear her voice, If only I could see her smile just once , and hear her say I love you. But fate played a fatal role in my life .

26 Comments

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37 months ago

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37 months ago

Very touching & fully emotional!!

37 months ago

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36 months ago

Hi,thank you for the nice poem,it reminds me of my parents who died early,its so full of emotion

36 months ago

Hi,thank you for the nice poem,it reminds me of my parents who died early,its so full of emotion

36 months ago

nice i hope to see yuo,soon

36 months ago

i am so happy to listen your poen ur so sad personatly and and today i am also so sad bcs my love is die and i can't show here face at last time i am so sad when i am so i am start weeping bcs i am alone in world

36 months ago

dear friend Mobi , No one in this world is alone, yes a link maybe broken but oneday you will be joined again.. God and His angels are always with us.. So dont be sad , just be happy and keep on smiling

36 months ago

wonderfull thoughts if one totally surrenders to will of GOD the life and the world becomes pleasent and one is incommand wair ahmad

36 months ago

very nice and wonderful keep it up. God grace, to reach new horizone through your imagine.

Subbu

36 months ago

no boday barn toghter. every bady are single but the heart is greed see the next bady figer so don't be satness only the want. the world is selfish. who did at own enjoia. this is the think only for rul to know at view at person. so take care selfish person an see what is the rights on nature
thank you
bye

35 months ago

no boday barn toghter. every bady are single but the heart is greed see the next bady figer so don't be satness only the want. the world is selfish. who did at own enjoia. this is the think only for rul to know at view at person. so take care selfish person an see what is the rights on nature
thank you
bye

35 months ago

whate amagic word,s you say are you get it frome honey river or from the sea of the love

34 months ago

GOod writing... :)

23 months ago

thank you my dear friends, if only everyone could feel the poems meaning and imagine what it feels like, we all live and never worry abt what is happening on the outside some child is all alone and cold

21 months ago

thnk u

17 months ago

nice

17 months ago

I will be back to read.

16 months ago

Well Managed, Informative.

16 months ago

believe me i can relate.I am grown now never knowing my birth family,being bounced from this home to that home and all the crap that goes along with being an orphan.thanks for sharing.I do have a few good memories from here and there KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!

16 months ago

WOW THESE ARE AMAZING work....VERY nice work i like it...
very nice.....Nice post George.
However small it is,nice..................keep it up
he he he ......I hope so.........keep it up

16 months ago

Very well versed, sad poetry although I know there are many people in this world who are facing this everyday in their lives but we have to keep strong and keep going.

13 months ago

poetry is very eduguational poetry and so nice

13 months ago

very merciful .... thank you for sharing

12 months ago