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Perfect Heart

by Power User Iftikhar Ifti on January 14, 2011

Perfect Heart

One day a young man was standing in the middle of the town proclaiming that he had the most beautiful heart in the whole valley.
A large crowd gathered and they all admired his heart for it was perfect. There was not a mark or a flaw in it.
Yes, they all agreed it truly was the most beautiful heart they had ever seen. The young man was very proud and boasted more loudly about his beautiful heart. Suddenly, an old man appeared at the front of the crowd and said,
"Why your heart is not nearly as beautiful as mine." The crowd and the young man looked at the old man's heart. It was beating strongly, but full of scars, it had

3 Comments

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28 months ago

... i really enjoyed reading this... did you write this yourself?? its like a natural story-teller.. im seeing the young man and the old man with their hearts.. i felt their characters.. Love's innocence and Love's trials..

28 months ago

Thanks for your comments! I share it with all my friends and fans!

17 months ago