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My Eyes Will Ever

by Senator D Poet Rhumour on September 29, 2010
   PRIZE WINNING POETRY
My Eyes Will Ever

My Eyes Will Ever

Tip me a wink,
don't let my heart sink,
there's so much passion in the thoughts that I think...
 
Pray hold out your hand,
help me to understand,
all that your heart wants to find in a man...

26 Comments

Very Nice Poem.

15 months ago

Thank you Basit - glad you like it :) Best wishes, Dave

15 months ago

Keep on writing for Fanbox.

15 months ago

great post ......keep it up.good info i like and enjoy to read your post

15 months ago

Thanks Waqas and Shazi - Yes I will keep writing more poems, etc - and adding a few from my earlier work too. :) Best wishes, Dave

15 months ago

Hi Umar - my thanks for reading and commenting - much appreciated! Best wishes, Dave

15 months ago

what a beautiful poetry , i really appreciate you from my heart.

15 months ago

great ...................post

15 months ago

Thank you Mr Imperfect, (you might like to know that one of my poems is 'The Perfect Man Does Not Exist), your comments are very welcome! Best wishes, Dave

15 months ago

Hi Abdul - my thanks to you for reading and commenting - much appreciated. Best wishes, Dave

15 months ago

Hi Meriem, my thanks for reading and commenting - much appreciated :) Best wishes, Dave

15 months ago

Nice

14 months ago

hello Dave, we share our own interest, i do love making my original poems... what can i say your brilliant truly an eloquent poet , ill take off my hat for you....i applaud your masterpiece and i can feel the emotions in very poems.........god bless!

14 months ago

nice post, very good

14 months ago

Thanks again Charlotte - glad to see you are browsing through so many of my poems. :) Best wishes, Dave

14 months ago

Thank you very much Romel for your generous comments! :) I wish you well with your poetry too - it certainly gets easier over time to find the lines that express your inner thoughts and feelings. Perhaps we will chat about writing sometime?

Best wishes, Dave

14 months ago

Hello Tommy, my thanks to you also for reading and commenting - be sure to browse through more poems another day! :) best wishes, Dave

14 months ago

very nice poetry thanks to share

11 months ago

My thanks to you Anwar - I appreciate you taking the time to comment on this poem. Best wishes, Dave

11 months ago

beautiful poem, the flow is very good..i enjoyed reading your poem

9 months ago

Thank you Renu, glad you have enjoyed reading it. I hope you find many more of my poems to your liking. Best wishes, Dave

9 months ago

will get down to reading them tomorrow...have office tomorrow and now past midnight :)

9 months ago

Ah - the work word that binds us to time... Such is life! :)

9 months ago