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A poem of a warrior

by Congresswoman May Ram on September 25, 2011

A poem of A warrior

 

THE NAMELESS CHILD 

There is a mountain of gold.  When the sun's rays strike it, it is irritating to look at.  It is surrounded by red, green, yellow orange, pink and liver-colored clouds, wafted gently by the wind.  Around the mountain fly thousands of copper-winged birds with silver heads and iron beaks.  A ruby sun rises in the East and a crystal moon sets in the West.  The whole earth is covered with pearl-dust snow.  Upon it a luminous child without a name instantaneously comes into being.

23 Comments

nice...................5*

20 months ago

thank you.

20 months ago

great post luv it!!!!! seriously nice

20 months ago

intriguing! I just can't imagine a God so loving to let a child be left on his own without any conceptions, dreams-- no nothing...It's really absurd. Even the title speaks of a warrior, but how can any one be a warrior when, in fact (as expressed in here) he doesn't have any point of reference (war or peace beauty or otherwise, and so on)..He doesn't not even have a language (actually he really does not need to if he's in an environment like this (no one else around him, no emotions, no feelings). I wonder why he thought of putting "a handful of pearl dust" into his mouth. He already has an orientation of food (the pearl dust) to be placed on his mouth but does not even know how to cry (or does not even know what word to associate with such)..really absurd..the video is great--thanks for sharing...
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20 months ago

nice

19 months ago

perfect mabuhay to all

18 months ago

Thank you all for your opinion and wonderful words. :) xxx

18 months ago

Miss May Ram more power and more Blogging......

18 months ago

nice post...

18 months ago

NICE

18 months ago

Awesome poem May! Very creative and thought provoking!

18 months ago

this is very nice..

18 months ago

very nice informative post..thanx for sharing such a nice blog..

18 months ago

hmm i like poems

17 months ago

Thank You!

17 months ago

I like to hear words said from the heart, because I know it means a lot....

So well said, May. Yeah, this is a real LOVE dedication to the entire Fanbox Team.

Beautiful!

17 months ago

thank you all, xxx

17 months ago

very nice information

16 months ago

thank you

16 months ago

nice posting

15 months ago

Very nice May. Enjoyed the writing very much. Take care always.

2 months ago