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Subject to Change

by Ivy Marie on April 21, 2011

Changing the Subject.

Stomach pains and mental rains

cheerfull grains, wistfull veins

burning down everything around

vexing questions, perplexing

pressure filled demands of the day

carefully constructed, cautiously created

empty endings constantly re-written

dressing to impress no one, carefree egos

10 Comments

once again...beautiful!

26 months ago

Im always so thankfull when people take the time to bother... again, I thank you

26 months ago

nice poems

24 months ago

Good poetry, check your spelling, it will give you the air of a pro. Encompass one feeling in each poem and they will be more powerful. Today Despair, tomorrow, pain. Get inside yourself and really let the truth out. Everyone feels pain, but show me how to feel yours and your golden.

22 months ago

wonderful

22 months ago

good

17 months ago

great info

17 months ago

Jess has some good points...I so enjoyed the flow of your poem Ivy. You have improved greatly from your poems I first read. Great job here.

15 months ago

great informoction

7 months ago